A-3
B-4
C-3

• the first paragraph are all talking about his understanding of the book, but nothing about his own acting. There is also no thesis statement in the 1st paragraph. 
• The third and forth paragraph also doesn't talk about his acting. Especially, even if he analysis the whole book, he should be more focus on his own scene. 
• use the word evil too many times.
• lack of details. 
• the author plays the role of Elizabeth, but he keeps talking about Richard, which makes readers confuse.
• too many paragraphs
• too general.